久しぶりのWEBレッスン。
一年ぶりのJohn先生からの訂正

I have two sons and during Golden Week they cOme back home. XX
My two sons came home to visit during Golden week. OO

I don‘t take alcohol so much. XX
I don‘t drink alcohol very often. OO

Many new beverages are available. XX
Because there are a lot of new beverages. OO

The decrease in wine consumption may also be because of the increased availability of cheap, clean drinking water.

通じたけれど、ナチュラルでなかったり、文法ミスがあったりして、やはり話すとなると、瞬発力、というか、本当に実力がないと、間違えてしまうものですね。